Issue 8 April 2002

Academic Writing

To produce good academic writing, not only foreign students but native speaker students have problems too.  There are many processes involved, like thinking of ideas, making an outline, writing, reading and revising.  We need to write regularly and do a lot of exercises.    (ADS student)

Writing in English remains a problem for Indonesian students for several reasons.  English word order is different to Indonesian, and if Indonesian students keep this style the effect is very strange.  Secondly, English vocabulary is more varied which can be frustrating for Indonesians used to a limited vocabulary range.  Also tenses are complicated and change in accordance with the time something happens.

(Nani, ADS6)

To talk about Asian students is like talking about colourful fish in the sea.  We cannot make generalizations about Asian students as there are hundreds or even thousands of ethnic groups which are all culturally different to each other.

(M.Wayong, ADS student)


My suggestions for good academic writing are; firstly to focus your ideas and secondly to express yourself logically.

(ADS student)
There are many processes involved in writing, such as pre-writing, writing and revising, and within these stages students from different language or cultural backgrounds have different strategies.  They often present written material which is inappropriate because they do not understand the patterns.  In my opinion there are many things that influence students to make good writing.  First there is a link between writing and reading.  Reading provides students with stimuli for topics.  Next, vocabulary is also important as some words have more than one meaning and, to be clear, students need to have knowledge about vocabulary.  In addition, students need lots of practice to increase their fluency and accuracy.
(ADS 9 student)
Steve BoltonEverybody agrees that you can improve your writing by doing lots of reading.  However, if you really want to improve then you’ll need to do more than just read.  One of the most important skills is ‘noticing the gap’ between how native English speakers write, and how you and your peers write.  Notice, for example, the differences in choice of vocabulary.  Where you write ‘salah satu’, we usually write ‘a’, and not ‘one of’.  Notice structural variations.  You write ‘I am difficult to understand...’, but we don’t, and not because we never misunderstand! Notice cultural variations.  You write ‘free sex’ where we would more likely choose ‘promiscuity’.  And notice how writers first of all state their ideas and then develop them into sound arguments.

Much of the time you don’t even need a teacher to help you with this.  What you do need however is time, patience, determination, and a genuine interest in what you’re doing.  As with most of life’s challenges, try to keep in mind that it’s your attitude, and not your aptitude, that determines your altitude. 

(Steve Bolton, Teacher, IALF Bali)


Alan BrayneMy advice to you is that you should keep your writing simple and always build your sentence around the main verb.  Of course, I’m not suggesting that all your sentences consist of only five or six words, nor that you repeat the same conjunction a hundred times in one piece of writing.  It is very important to use a variety of sentence structures, but it is also important to make sure that you have full control of those which you use.

The longer your sentence becomes, the more likely it is that your grammar will break down.  So, every time you find you have written a sentence that is more than about three lines long, be careful.  Check and double-check that your grammar is correct and that what you say will make sense to the reader.  If you’re not 100% sure, break that complicated sentence down to two simpler ones.

Don’t try to say too many things in one sentence. Remember – it is better to be simple and understood than complex and unintelligible.

(Alan Brayne, Teacher, IALF Bali)


I think one of the best ways to improve your writing is by reading as much as possible of anything you can get hold of (newspapers, magazines, novels, textbooks ...).  There are many reasons for this:

1) To expand your vocabulary.  You don’t need to look up every word you don’t know in the dictionary, but you should at least try to make an educated guess based on the context.

2) To familiarize yourself with English syntax, even if this is a subconscious process.  By reading extensively in English, you will gradually develop a ‘feel’ for sentence structure which will help to make your writing flow more.

3) To widen your experience and encourage you to think about different issues.

(Jo Woolley, Teacher, IALF Bali)


 

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